6 years ago

I want to know your views on the poem written by me.

Be Myself

I walk through the roads

In between the crowd

One says go this way

And the other says go that way

I look up in sky

Thinking I’ll be myself and find my way

Reminders for do this and do that

Confuse me a lot

I just want to be myself and decide

I walk through the roads

In between the crowd

One says go this way

And the other says go that way

I look up in sky

And down on road

I guess I know which road I want to go

And I’ll go on my own

Eat this and eat that

They say to me

I guess I know how to eat

As I have been eating since childhood

I walk through the roads

In between the crowd

One says go this way

And the other says go that way

I look up in sky

And side ways

I see scenario and enjoy

They say hurry up and run along

I guess I’ll look through the way

 Enjoying it and be myself

All the way long

They say be this and be that

I say I know what I’ll be

They laughed at me, saying

You don’t know what you want to be

They say so and I laugh

I know my way long

I walk through the roads

In between the crowd

One says go this way

And the other says go that way

I look up in sky

And I analyze the roads

Which one should I choose

To reach where I want to be

The perfect road I try to see

They say you can’t make your mind

And you’re confused

I say I want the best way as I walk

I’ll just be myself

 Through the road of life.

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6 years ago

I have written this poem "Be Myself" today so I wanted to share with everyone here.

Arunima Singh
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6 years ago

Well, echoes with thoughts of many who believe in being 'me' and enjoy life. Seemed like seeing a mirror


I am open to experience what life's mystery bag holds for me

www.arunimakunwar.blogspot.in

Bajirao
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6 years ago

Nice poem.. It seems you have expressed your view n a  nice way.. Keep it up.. Keep posting the poems I love to read them.

Kalyani Nandurkar
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6 years ago
Nice poem, Vishakha! Keep it up!

"I am free of all prejudice. I hate everyone equally."
- W. C. Fields :)

Thank you said by: Vishakha Purohit
anil
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6 years ago

Nice written, and it is inspiring one. Thanks

rambabu
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6 years ago

Writing Poetry is definitely a skill. I wish all success. to her.

Thank you said by: Vishakha Purohit
Arunima Singh
Platinum Mate
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6 years ago

This poem beautifully depicts the chaos that we witness in our inner self when bombarded with so much of advices from outside world. Heeding the correct ones and staying immune to the unwanted ones is an art one has to learn to be self


I am open to experience what life's mystery bag holds for me

www.arunimakunwar.blogspot.in

Divya
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6 years ago

very beautifully written.. looking forward to more. 


Life is really simple, but we insist on making it complicated - Confucius

Babu saroj
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6 years ago

Well thought and well executed.


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