6 years ago

I have written this poem today and thought of sharing it here.

When Life Dawns On me

Hearing the chirping of birds

Looking out at a smiling baby

Holding on to the palm of the mother

Watching the first step of toddler

Listening to the first word of a child

Feeling proud of learning new things

That’s all enough

When life dawns on me

Looking at my pet

Wondering what it is thinking

Watching the tail wagging

Feeling the eagerness of chewing

That’s all enough

When life dawns on me

Finding myself lost near beach

Feeling I am so little compared to the ocean

Realizing I am enough for my own life

That’s all it takes

When life dawns on me

Feeling the hands of soul-mate

Knowing he or she will be there

Going gets tough

Watching peacefully as times passes by

That’s all enough

When life dawns on me.


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6 years ago

Beautiful inspiring poem.

Thank you said by: Vishakha Purohit
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6 years ago
yes, its truely inspiring poem, I think you are eligible to become one of the good poet, I think you should keep on doing this.


Thank you said by: Vishakha Purohit
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6 years ago

Writing poetry needs special skills and command over the language in any language. This poem is really inspiring. Kudos to the writer.

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6 years ago

another inspiring peom by you.. Keep posting your poems.. I like to read them.. Keep it up..

Thank you said by: Vishakha Purohit
6 years ago

You could always check my blog, "thenewvoicevishakha.wordpress.com" to check out my other poems, fiction and serial fiction if you would like to read them.

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